All of a sudden Athanasia, while being at Olympia's house,she got thirsty. She saw a small bottle of a mystery drink. Curious she drunk it, suddenly everything started getting bigger, Athanasia thought "What is happening to me?!". She freaked out and started shouting her best friend's name. But soon she understood that she couldn't hear her, so she went upstairs to find her. When Olympia saw her she was surprised, but then she noticed Athanasia's clothes were to big for her, so she dressed her with a doll's dress and tried to find a way to get her back to normal, but no luck. At around 3 o'clock at night Olympia felt hungry so she went downstairs and ate about 3 biscuits. Suddenly she saw the things looked smaller. She looked at the mirror and she was shocked..."Oh my god!". "I am huge". She panicked and went to talk with Athanasia. When Athanasia saw her she panicked because now none of them was normal. The next morning nervous they went to a witch, who gave them a potion and they became normal again.
This was enjoyable to read as you included different perspectives which gave your story more weight. Would have loved more details about the witch though, how did they get in touch with her? Maybe she already had her number from a previous experience...
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